Apologize (a better poem than the other one)

Apologize

Why are you yelling?
Why waste your breath?
When whoever you're yelling at,
May as well be deaf.

They don't listen anyway,
And you don't realize,
The trauma and pain
You're causing me inside.

So stop all this yelling,
Stop wasting your breath,
Talk it out,
It's not a fight to the death.

There's no need for this anger
That you keep locked up inside,
Just get off your high horse,
And apologize.

better than the other poem i think... let me know your opinion
~ZestyUnicornBits

poem (might be good, might be bad, im not great with poetry)

so this poem has no name yet and im not even sure it makes sense, but ok.

 Watching the lightning through my window,
splitting the skies open wide,
now I'm falling back down to Earth.

Crazy, I might be,
but I'm clinging to this last shred of my sanity,
knowing it's the only thing,
that keeps me going through the days,
and now the rain is pouring down,
pouring down my face.


it's not very good I don't think, I don't think it's finished yet...